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dopee
07-01-05, 12:06 AM
This is something I "scribbled" on my comp a few years ago. I'd be greatly interesting to see what you all think of it. The story with the paladin picks up after Thrall freed Grom from the Alliance and set sail to Kalimdor.

Enjoy,
dopee.


Prologue


There came the soft creak of a wagon through the darkness of a late summer night. Robed and cloaked, two figures were hauling a covered shipment of grain into the village, but it seemed that they were taking great care not to spill any on the ground. The tallest robed of the two seemed nervous.

“Hurry up, fool, get this to the grainary!” he said hoarsely.

They had just passed into the streets of Andorhal, a cozy little village of North-east Lordaeron. The hamlet was made up of mostly farmers and craftsmen, who slept in tall, narrow houses jammed together. All but the town guards were soundly asleep, for it was late and the night was cold. Oddly enough, this did not seem to have much affect on the two men, who only coughed quietly. After many more curses and taking the wrong cobbled road, they finally found the Town Center where several tall, thatched granaries stood.

“Is this the right one?” said the shorter man.

“I think so, from the size of it,” came the answer. “We must make sure though—he said the biggest, and biggest only.”

They went to park their wagon behind the granary, but found slumbering guardsmen. Silently backing away, the two left the wagon close to the front of the granary, hoping it would not be noticed. Then they commenced in comparing granaries, whispering as to which was bigger, or had more grain. Eventually they settled on the original.

“Alright, bring the cart here,” the tallest whispered hoarsely, pointing to a small door.

His companion obeyed, but they found the door locked shut. “I was afraid of this,” the tallest mumbled. “Open it,” he said.

The shorter man knelt by the door, producing a key out of his pocket. It shone dull green in the night, lighted by the waning crescent moon. It was much smaller the door’s lock. Neither said anything about it though, for once the key was fitted into the lock, it silently expanded to fit. With a turn, a click, and a spill of grain, the door opened.

“Now hurry!” the short man whispered. “Help me put this in here!”

They carefully took the cover off the wagon, which had the result of spreading a smell that reeked of decaying flesh. It soon dissipated into the night air, but the men did not seem to mind. Grain was in the cart, but only a very small amount, and in a minute it had all been thrown into the granary.

“Be sure that’s all,” the tallest said.

“It is,” the shorter responded. “Let’s go.”

They left quietly. In the village the next morning, the grain was sold to local villagers.. By noon the granaries were completely empty. Most of the grain was now in the homes of Andorhal, and the rest was making its way to the surrounding villages.



Part I:

Somewhere in the Arathi Mountains near the shore of the sea stood a man, crouched over, feeling the soft, moist earth with his hands. He was looking along a path soiled with many large prints, moving his hand in motions, feeling the tracks. He was a clearly a paladin, for he wore strong armor and carried a terrible war hammer with him. His name was Aliath.

“They took the ships, you said?” he asked a soldier next to him.

“That’s right, milord. Do you think they’ll attack a port?”

“Their foot-prints lead towards the boats,” Aliath said, ignoring the footmen next to him, “many orcs’ prints: a great troop passed this way.” He looked up and sniffed. “But why they would take ships? Orcs wouldn’t attack our ports, they’re too well guarded.” He stood up with his hand to his chin: “They must be leaving Lordaeron.”

He looked at the large, orcish prints again and smiled, then turned and walked up a cliff overlooking a port where several ships had been anchored. He looked deep into the black ocean before him, black with the rage of an coming storm. Lightning flickered far, far away. The whole sky was wreathed in dark clouds. Behind him the dark, green pines of Loraeron rustled in the wind.

“If they’re strong, the orcs shall survive in this storm,” he said to himself. The footmen had joined others on the shore. “But only if they’re strong---only if they’re strong,” he muttered, and he began to narrow his eyes on the black horizon, and stared , trance-like for some time, before coming out of it.

He left the cliff as the light rain began to downpour heavily, and disappeared into the chilly mist blowing in from the sea, heading for the murky yellow lights of his camp. Once there he made his way to a doctor's tent. Lifting the flap he entered. At the far end of the tent was the leech, Irec. As Aliath came up to him, he saw leech bending over a cleaved body.

“Damn orcs,” he muttered. “They took down our towers, slaughtered our soldiers, and stole their warchief away. And they now have our boats, damit!” He slung his hands down, flinging blood onto the wooden floor. On a bed next to him was the body of a footmen: the shiny armor painted in dark red blood in spots, mingled with the man’s own. He passed a blanket over the man's head. “I swear, we have to do something again about the orcs here, Aliath.”

“Well they aren't here anymore, Irec, and they didn’t take our ships to attack us, they took them to leave Lordaeron—for good. I saw the vessels from a cliff; they were far away on the horizon. They were leaving this land.”

“Some, not all," said Irec. "They infect everyone like a plague; there will be more to deal with sometime.” He waved his hand and called an attendent to come and remove the dead man.

“Sometime,” said Aliath waving his hand, “not now. Not for a while, at least. Perhaps at last we can turn our attention wholly on our own lands, and have real peace from war. But we have some things to discuss. Come."

Aliath left the tent and came to his own tent. It was a common ritual, almost, for the leech. There would be a battle or skirmish, and the paladin would talk with Irec for a few minutes. Aliath enjoyed having someone to confide in now and again, and Irec was the best educated man in the camp. He followed the paladin to his tent, and sat in a chair opposite Aliath, who had lit a lantern.

“If you want peace, then you’ll not be pleased about the plague: it’s spreading more and more, and the Alliance isn’t as strong as it once was,” Irec said.

“You are not telling anything I don’t know,” Aliath replied, the lamp swinging above him as he sat down. “But at least there’s no war, and at least the plague is a disease and not a horde. Plagues die out, orcs don’t. And that’s enough for me.”

Irec leaned forward from his chair and folded his hands, saying, “I completely agree. Orcs….far worse than plagues or breaking alliances….very much so. But some think the horde is on the move, from their attacks on the internments.”

“Yes,” Aliath murmured, “the horde is certainly moving, but not against us. King Tereans is king and can think as he wants, but I believe they’re gone. I think whatever orcs are still left in Lordaeron will be eventually returned to the internments, and I think that the orcs that attack our camps are the orcs on those ships. Man may have not seen the last of orc, but I pray he has seen the last of the horde.”

“At the expense of thousands of lives. Well worth it, but hard to bear at times,” said Irec.

“But you can only move on, Irec, only move on to the future, to whatever different perils await us there. If a new threat arises, then we will be there to defend ourselves just as we did in the first war against the orcs, for we will never surrender, never cave, never lose hope in our Light. And the orcs learned this the hard way, and have now left, their lesson learned. At last, a chance for peace!”

The two friends fell silent, idly listening to the heavy torrent of rain on the tent, breaking the silence. Aliath began to file through scrolls and maps and lists. “But even in peace, we must prepare for war,” he said suddenly.

“Hm, ah, what?”

“The towers, boats, lost men,” Aliath said. “Tomorrow, early dawn, start peasants on re-building our defense, and look into telling Admiral Proudmoore about our loss of ships. I’ll go through the camp, repair what damage the fleeing orcs did….see to some other things. You,” Aliath said looking up from a brown scroll. He stood up with Irec, “get some sleep. You’ll be up again in four hours. Peasants up in five.”

“Of course, paladin. Goodnight sir. I hope this damned torrent e’ll stop in four hours!” Irec said cheerfully.

Aliath smiled. “See you on those towers tomorrow morning.”

“I’ll be there,” Irec said, and walked off to his tent.


The morning dawned bright after the storm; Irec was exactly where Aliath had ordered him to be and the rebuilding the bridge felled by the orcs and rebuilding towers were hard work; but by late evening, the damage done by the orcs was more or less eradicated, and the slain gaurds, footmen, riflemen and knights replaced. Human scouts had also discovered the location of an abandoned orc camp north-east of where the attacks had been, and they estimated it had been recently occupied. In fact, inside one of the orc buildings was found a smoldering fire. The Paladin, Aliath, soon ordered better scouts to patrol the area, and cover more forest. As for himself, the paladin had decided to travel to the capital of Lordaeron and talk to King Terenas about the orcish threats. Even if those orcs had left, he mused to Irec once, there are indeed other more demon related tribes in the area, especially at Blackrock; and those must be dealt with severly.

Aliath would leave to see about this, perhaps to try and persuade the Terenas to send another paladin down to the Arathi with him to deal with the Blackrock orcs. If his trip went well, he would be at his with troops in the Arathi at the end of two weeks. Indeed his need to see the king was urgent, that night, he took leave of his men and Irec, whom he placed in charge, under a large tent normally used for wounded soldiers. Save for last night, there had not been very many of those for years. He gave his farewell to the soldiers, leaving them quite a few barrels of liquor, and walked to his simple, brown horse. Behind it was Irec.

“Ah! you snuck out,” Aliath said.

“Very observant. Actually I just came to wish you goodluck.”

“Thank you,” Aliath dryly said as he swung a leg over the horse and mounted it. “But stay out of trouble. Do not disturb the orcs at Blackrock, even if they do send some war party this way, or worse. Only defend against them… for now.”

“I’ll see to it,” Irec said. “May the light shine on your path, my friend.”

“Farewell!” said Aliath. He spurred his horse into the gloom of night, leaving Irec watching his horse become swallowed into it, smiling, then walking back into the tent. Meanwhile the paladin sped through the night; he had chosen the darkness to avoid any monsters that would undoubtedly hamper him, for there were many wild creatures and unsavory men in those lands.

Flak
07-01-05, 12:13 AM
Very nicely written. I applaud your style and skill, though your particular tale does not hold much glitter for me.

Ogrey-Author
07-01-05, 05:59 AM
Not exactly gripping, although part of the reason it is so is due to the fact we're learning about a famliar, old storyline.

dopee
07-01-05, 09:19 PM
Thanks for your comments.

I would generally agree with what you guys have said, and have considered changing the story to something less familiar and more exciting, given that the beginning isn't terribly gripping.

dopee.

dopee
08-01-05, 03:31 PM
For those who've read the first part, I've decided to go ahead and post another portion of my story about a paladin. Again, I'd be pleased to see what you guys think.

dopee.


Sratholme

Aliath rode into the village Stratholme when the sun began to touch the pines in the west. Sratholme was a large town, stocked with cheery folk who fared well despite the looming presence of orc tribes in the mountains and forests surrounding their village. There were quite a few inns at the town, and some farms outside that would usually house travelers provided they gave fair enough wages. But a farmers idea of fair wages was much less than a innkeeper’s idea of the matter, so it is not it was not at all suprising to Aliath that he forwent the inns, at least for sleep. He stabled his horse in a dimly, yellow lit barn the was owned by a local innkeeper. (he did eat, drink and stable his horse there, not entirely trusting whatever farmer he would stay with), and made his way to the northern outskirts of the little town, finding quite a few number of thatched roof barns and quaint little houses looking somewhat like a miniature of the barns. Many were utterly dark inside, save for a few eerie candles glowing through windows, but Aliath eventually found one with enough candles lit to seem hospitable.

Ascending an ill-kept cobble path to the house, he knocked sharply, and to his surprise the door creaked open at once. Out stuck the nose of a young, burly man and his slimmer wife, who, Aliath thought, was fairly attractive for a farmer’s wife.

“Greetings, my friends,” said Aliath cheerily.

The wife and husband exchanged strange glances. What they had immediately noticed was that, though Aliath’s armor was hidden beneath a dark blue cloak, he his battle-hammer was not. Indeed, the paladin was leaning on it as he spoke.

“Um, how much, exactly, will you pay?”

Aliath produced a few silver coins from his cloak: “enough for only a room.”

The couple took a look at Aliath’s money. “Hmm. I suppose this ‘ell do nicely,” the husband said. “I am Derek, and this is my wife, Linda. You are welcomed….for the night.”

“Pleasured,” Aliath said lamely. “Where is my room?”

“Ah, pay first, please?” the wife said, though her husband looked embarrassed at her abruptness.

Aliath moved up a step so that the door could be shut in his face once the silver was given. He was a tall, strong man, and even the farmer’s wife stepped back a pace at this; with a pert smile he gave the money, taking a care to drop the coins into the husband’s hands, not he wife’s, whom, despite her looks, he had quickly developed an ill feeling towards.

“Once again,” he said, stepping into the unlit house, “where is my room?”

“Up the stairs, of course,” Derek said. “There’s no fireplace, but we have plenty of wool blankets, if you need them.”

“Thank you, but no, I don’t,” Aliath said. More or less, he was used to cold nights. “And if that is the end of our formalities I will catch some sleep, if I may.”

“Go ahead, there’s nothing up there but a cot,” Linda murmured.

“Very well,” Aliath said.

He ascended the stairs that led straight to a small crooked door, and soon found out that this upper room of the young couple was indeed barren. “Apparently,” Aliath thought, “they haven’t been married long enough to make the place into storage.” He was not entirely happy with his choice of house. First, he thought their reaction to him strange. He was a paladin, and when farmers had a one such as these staying at there house, there was no end in what they humbly offered them. Paladins were admired, respected, and loved, and though Aliath did not care much about “admiration” and “love,” to himself he did think that “respect” was needed. Most of the people of Lordaeron were honored to have a Paladin stay in their homes. Derek and Linda, however, did not seem to care; they were even cold in their manner towards him. Being the man he was though, Aliath did not dwell on the matter for long; he was not interested with these people and merely wanted some sleep. “I would have it too, if only those blasted folk below would shut up,” he murmured surly, for as he now noticed there had been the steady hum of Derek and Linda talking in the room below. Aliath had enough of it after a minute or so, and was on the verge of asking them to talk in the morning when he heard Linda whisper sharply,

“He’s a paladin!”

Aliath put his head on the floorboard.

“Of course he is! He has that look,” Derek whispered back.

“Not to mention the hammer. Oh Derek, what shall we do? The acolytes will be here soon!”

“I know,” Aliath heard, “and I know we shouldn’t have the paladin here, so don’t say it again! The question is what do with him, and I think I have the answer.”

Their voices lowered. Aliath barely caught what Derek said next.

“We should have the coven come here, as planned. I couldn’t stop them anyway. But why tell them? They’ll never know, of course, and the paladin will leave early morning. He doesn’t know.”

“You’ll be very much in trouble if you don’t tell them. Curse the light! Think of what he might do to the puny paladin! He’d be pleased, I’ll tell you that!”

“But there’s no way to—”

The voice of husband and wife ceased as a knock came at the door. There was a scuffle shoes—one of the couple had opened the door, and a great many people had come into the cottage and were now whispering together. Then someone cleared their throat and began a low, dull speech, beginning with the words, “Welcome Acolytes! Are we all here? Yes, yes, we are, aren’t we. Good! Now I will carry on our meeting, which should—”

“Please, lord, allow me to speak!”

Aliath recognized the voice as Linda’s, and strangely enough she was not bothering to lower her voice.

“What do you have to say?” the leader said.

Aliath did not hear what he did have to say, but he guessed it. Soon there were raised voices and people moving to and fro. He had the feeling that in Derek and Linda’s argument, the latter had won out. He crawled into his cot again, unconcerned.

“Let them try to kill,” he said. “it will do them no good.”

(next part below)

dopee
08-01-05, 03:32 PM
Suddenly the door creaked open. Aliath pretended he had been raised from sleep, and was only vaguely was aware of what was happening. Standing in the doorway was a black-bearded man dressed in dirty brown robes and a tall pointed hat. He looked in need of a bath, but had an air of charm about him.

“Greetings, paladin!” he boomed. “Your presence was not expected. Forgive us.” The man bowed very low.

Aliath stood up from the cot, grasping the hammer in his hand. The wizards voice he recognized as the speaker below. “And what business does a wizard have in a farmer’s house?” he said, and then noticing Linda and Derek behind the wizard, adding, “a farmer’s house that has proved ill-mannered and uncomfortable, contrary to the common treatment of paladins?”

“Ah, forgive them, lord,” the wizard said, rising. “they had no knowledge of your stature, and thought you some brigand or thief at first. It was only later that after serious thought and consideration, they discovered your true identity.”

“It’s true, milord, every word!” Derek squeaked.

“Whatever the reason, why am I once again being disturbed? Once it was idle talk below, all to easy to hear, now it is a wizard, a rogue wizard too.”

Linda and Derek looked at each with ghastly faces, but the wizard maintained his composure.

“We don’ t like to disturb paladins,” he said, “but I and the rest of the farmers would dearly appreciate your presence below.”

“What for?”

“Oh, well, you don’t want to spoil the secret do you? Suffice it to say we will honor you, as is proper.”

Aliath looked the wizard hard in the eyes. It was obvious to him that behind that curtain of appeasement was a sinister motive. But he had no choice in the matter. He was at this house, the matter dealt with him, and he already heard the couple’s conversation.

“Very well,” Aliath said. He descended the stairs with the wizard, but not without his war-hammer.

Aliath had not seen the downstairs homestead very well when he came in. It had been dark, the only candles shining not from the main room but from the couple’s bedroom. Now, instead of darkness, there was a ashen light shining down on a circular wooden table, around it gathered several cloaked and hooded individuals. Many of them seem to have an incessant cough.

“Please, milord,” the wizard whispered, “do say hello to the acolytes.”

“I will do what I wish on my own time, rogue,” Aliath said gruffly in return. The more he saw of the farmers, or, as the wizard called them, “acolytes,” the more he began to suspect something sinister was at work. To keep good standing, he did say hello, however, and was answered by throaty, mean voices.

“Won’t you take a seat, milord?” the wizard asked humbly.

“No, I’d rather stand. Now, why do you want me here?”

“We wish to make you an offer, paladin sir, a most humble offer worthy of even great princes,” and at this his eyes glowed a frosty blue for a moment, “and great kings, and chieftans, and even wizards, like myself. Indeed, I was offered this same pact, and, mind you paladin, I took it. I am a very wise person, if I may graciously say, and therefore it was obvious, when this pact came to me, that I should accept it. Therefore I entreat you do to the same.”

“You speak enthusiastically,” Aliath said, “which is commendable, in a way. What is this pact?”

“Ah! Good, I like that! Straight to the point, in your fashion; highly commendable and—”

“What is this pact!” Aliath said.

“Mercy milord, mercy! You must be patient. Please, do not interrupt me again, if you can help it.”

“Very well, I give you a few minutes. Use them wisely.”

The wizard looked at Aliath with a blank expression for quite some time, until a wry smile smoothly ran across his face.

“I accept,” said he. “Now, this is pact: eternal life, through undeath. Join our gracious coven, which is but a small crop of the larger field of covens, and you will obtain this. You will never die, and will always hold your honor and strength. Wisdom, knowledge, power, shall all be yours--and respect, of course. That is the pact, simple and forthright.”

“Whom do you serve?” Aliath quickly asked.

“That is to remain unknown to you, unless you join our coven; but, yes, sorrowfully, you must first put aside the light, which has for centuries robbed the peasants and farmers, lo, even the army of the Alliance, of its well being (I have seen it myself). Do you or do you not accept?”

Aliath, however, needed no amount of time, long or short, to give them his answer. “What?” he cried, “betray the same light that saved us from the orcs? Make myself a slave to a cult of undeath? Nay, I see what this is, and I will not, whether orc, undead, or elf or even king say so, submit to this wretched filth!” He grasped his hammer firmly, and planted it between his boots.

“That is too bad, paladin,” said the wizard calmly. “Now, what would have been willing for you, we must now do unwillingly! Acolytes! Seize him!”

Every Acolyte in the room rushed furiously at Aliath. The paladin stood his ground though, and lifting high his weapon, smote the head off of one Acolyte and sent the body of another slamming against the wall. They retreated, but Aliath charged into them, and it was not long before all of the Acolytes were maimed, unconscious, or dead. Aliath had no injury whatsoever, but the fray was not done. The rogue wizard reached into his robes and unsheathed a mighty, undead sword with a cold ring. Holding it aloft, a staff appeared in his hand, crowned by a goat’s head wreathed in cold mists. He struck Aliath with a chilling frost spell.

No words were exchanged, but the real fight then began. Aliath, having alighted the divine shield of paladins, hammered into the rogue. The wizard, avoiding what blows he could, struck hard on Aliath’s armor and delivered deathly frost spells. The fight was savage, but it ended quickly. The wizard swung his sword just shy of Aliath’s head, allowing the paladin to crash in hammer down upon the rogue’s arm over extended arm. He cried and fell unconscious into a heap on the floor. The rogue never woke, for the war-hammer of Aliath clove his head, and the wizards spirit arose, and fled northward. All then became very, very quiet, until Aliath heard someone coarsely whispering, “paladin, paladin,” and turned to see Derek. Aliath had struck him in the ribs, and from the farmer’s winces, Aliath saw he was in horrible pain.

“You have something to say?” he said, holding his hammer next to his ribs.

“Not something to say, something to give,” Derek sputtered weakly, and produced a brown paper wrapped around a deathly dagger’s hilt. “I never wanted to hurt anyone, ever. But if they ask, tell them I was always loyal to Terenas. Please, tell them that for me, so I may rest in peace.”

The farmer suddenly plunged the knife into his heart, and with a gasp fell dead at Aliath’s feet. The eerie, frosty light that had been present in the room went suddenly out, leaving the paladin in cold darkness.

Flak
08-01-05, 07:11 PM
Combined threads. If you're continuing a story, please post installments in one thread. Thanks.

dopee
08-01-05, 07:19 PM
thanks man. I'll do it next time.