The Escape.

[Lightforce]

"Priestess!"an archer cried"We have searched all around the area and there are groups of Arthas' minions searching for us!"
Tyrande,Shandris and several archers were captured after being attacked.Arthas had opened a portal that sucked many of Tyrande's people into it.They were then imprisoned in a Dungeon to fight for thier lives for the entertainment of the undead.Tyrande and her side archer, Shandris, escaped and had found themselves lost and Arthas was will to stop at nothing to find them.
"Fear not sister, Elune will guide us back home as time moves along. We must be strong and not fall to the enemy."Tyrande told the archer.
At that moment,a dozen gouls jumped from behind a large stone.
"Finally! some fresh meat! I've waitied too long and now here it is!"A gould said hungrily,
"Sisters Get ready to attack!"Tyrande Ordered.

To be coninued. . . . .

[BraveLiver]

Friendly criticism, because we ALL started here

- Type stories up in Word first, to save us from spelling and grammar mistakes.

- Each chapter should be about a page long in Word. This was a little short.

[Inquisistor7]

I must agree with Braveliver. I mean, this isn't terrible but in order to get a good picture of what is going on a larger amount of content is needed.