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spuds[MMoL]
23-11-04, 03:16 PM
Often, I have thought "Hmmm, I wonder what it woudl like to be a vat of curds and way". This story, however, has nothing to do with that. This story, is what it would be like to be a creep, in a game of wintermaul.

A Creeps Life
The Wintermaul Story

Chapter 1: Round 1-Sheep

Dispatcher: Ok. Listen up sheep. Here’s the situation. There are nine players out there, and there’s usually a noob. I think we’ve got a fair chance at not losing every one of you. Actually wait, we’ll lose every one of you, because your sheep, and lets face it: You’re weak.

Sheep 1: Baaa (For the convenience of the reader I shall translate BaAnese to English
!@#$er!

Dispatcher: What?? I speak the truth; you weaklings probably won’t ev.. I mean, every one of you will make it to the ship. Look, Teal is a noob. See all he has is 2, wait, three, uh oh!

Sheep 1: Baaa Of course he’s not a noob you idiot, didn’t you read the name game. Wintermaul: PROS ONLY. Pros ONLY. GET IT???

Dispatcher: How did one Baaa mean all that??

Sheep 2: Baaa we’re sheep. We don’t have a language, we’re not even talking. The author is just making us say things that he thinks would be funny. I mean COME ON! It takes more that a Baaa to say “ WHAT THE !@#$ IS YOUR PROBLEM?? WHY SHOULD WE GO THROUGH THIS STUPID MAZE. WE’VE GOT FAMILIES! WE ARE ALL JUST GOING TO DIE ANYWAYS!!!”

Dispatcher: Could you maybe show some optimism? You’re really bringing down the morale.

Sheep 2: Baaa WHAT MORALE?? WE’RE ABOUT TO DIE! WHY CAN’T WE JUST SURRENDER??

Dispatcher: Ok Fine. Sheep 2: You’re no longer spawning at Teal. It’s up to red with you. And he already has *counts quickly* 14 towers.

Sheep 2: Baaa Crap

Dispatcher: On you’re Marks! Get Set. GO!!
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Sheep 41: Baaa Well Steve (Known to our reader as sheep 17, had I mentioned him) It’s been nice knowing you

Sheep 17 (Steve): Baaa You to… Well HEY now, WHATS THIS? Look at that! It’s our lucky day! Teal messed up, and misplaced a tower! THERES A HOLE IN HIS MAZE!!!

All sheep scramble towards hole

Sheep 8: Baaa WE MADE IT *falls dead*

Sheep 41: Baaa Ouch! THEY SHOT ME!!!

Sheep 36: Baaa Hey Tom (Known to our reader as sheep 41) Wasn’t that Jim. I thought he was on round 2?

Sheep 41 (Tom): Baaa Naw, apparently he put in for a transfer. Same model as Tech Builder. Lucky !@#$@#

Meanwhile, at Red’s spawn.

*all sheep die, except 2*

Sheep 10: Baaa Wow Chris (Sheep 23) we’re alive!

Sheep 23 (Chris): Baaa Oh joy. Now we get to get shot at by Orange, aren’t WE the luckiest ones.

Sheep 10: Baaa Nuh Uh! Look, here comes Barney Charlie and Andy! (Sheep 27, 51, and 6) They made it past yellow and blue! We will go through Orange with them

Sheep 6 (Andy): Baaa Whew, that was scary. How’d ya’ll do?

Sheep 23 (Chris): Baaa Not so great. Its just me ‘n’ John (Sheep 10) . WAY too optimistic that one is. What about you?

Sheep 27 ( Barney): Baaa Well, there’s the three of us, plus Dan (Sheep 18). DAMN he’s weird. Claimed he was gonna finish because he saw a whole in purple, pink, and gray’s defenses. Safety in numbers I told him. But he wouldn’t listen *Gets shot dead by orange*

*all sheep at orange die*

Meanwhile at Purple

*All sheep but Dan (Sheep 18) die*

*Dan (Sheep 18) makes it to gray, and some how lives*

*Dan enters paradise and promptly explodes, then revives at debriefing*

Dispatcher: Well? What happened? Any hints?

Sheep 18 (Dan) Baaa HEHEHEHEheheHEHEHOOHAHAhooHAHAHhooHOHOHAHAH!

Dispatcher: Whoah! He IS crazy.

Stay tuned for Chapter 2: Round 2: Engineers

Flak
23-11-04, 05:04 PM
Oy ... work on your grammar. You're sheep, not your sheep You're saying that they are sheep (you are sheep) not their sheep (your sheep). So it's you're. Also, in the possessive, it would be creep's life, not creeps life. Creeps life would entail a plural and a floating noun of no importance. Aside from that, I'm really not enthralled by your attempt at a play (this cannot be called a story), and wish you better luck in your next endeavor.

BraveLiver
24-11-04, 07:06 AM
Original, but not that great. A decent attempt for a first story, but I hope that your next ones will be better.

Bullroarer
25-11-04, 07:06 AM
Gosu dawg pwnz0rz